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Old Mar 29, 2006, 11:49 AM   #1
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does this do anything for anyone? i thought it would be an interesting shot when i took it but idk now....







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Old Mar 29, 2006, 2:41 PM   #2
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it looks nicely done but it doesn't really grab my attention
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Old Mar 29, 2006, 2:44 PM   #3
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ya not much going on... ah well
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Old Mar 29, 2006, 3:41 PM   #4
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I'm not sure why, but I quite like this one...something about the bold roundish green structure and the ...with a pair of mysterious legs hanging down...opens up room for imagination...nice shot.JulesI like the color as well..
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Old Mar 29, 2006, 4:11 PM   #5
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The colours are great, I like the contrast between the green structure, the shoes and the ground
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Old Mar 29, 2006, 4:35 PM   #6
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thanks! i did some burning to get the dark look around the edges.
you two seem to really see what i saw when i took this photo, thanks for the response.
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Old Mar 29, 2006, 6:32 PM   #7
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Hi Mike,

I like this but I think the shape and repetition of the green playground equipment would have been more clearly observed if the slides were not in the background. I wonder if the view would have been unobstructed from the other side? Still a playful and curious rendition.
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Old Mar 29, 2006, 10:14 PM   #8
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this shot makes me think of a jones soda lable (local soda company)

it myself think a tighter crop would make this a keeper!

maybe a series with these shoes in different places? just a thought.


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Old Mar 30, 2006, 12:02 AM   #9
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A bit of soul searching, so to speak :G
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Old Mar 30, 2006, 10:51 AM   #10
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I really like this and I don't know why!!

Its very simple shot that has a lot going for it. The circles, the triangles, the straight lines, its very playful – in a playground! The colours are excellent too, the browns and greens blend very well, while the blue and white really stands out.

Excellent eye for something that most wouldn't remark on.
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