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Old Apr 19, 2006, 7:16 PM   #1
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hey this a recent photo , i am new to photography, so tell me what you think.
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Old Apr 19, 2006, 8:48 PM   #2
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im sorry but im really not that fon of this picture, it has no real point of focus... unless that was the look you were going for... keep snapping pictures... and keep learning (as i am too)

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Old Apr 20, 2006, 6:47 AM   #3
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i agree

its difficult to determine the focal point. The main subject shouldnt have to be looked for, it should jump out and hit the viewer as soon as the image opens.

my other issues is that the gras is in focus but the glove is not. im not sure if this is the intended effect but i think it definately hides the subject.

maybe try differnet focus techniques and dofs. I would also suggest a tighter crop and get the subject to take up a lil mor of the frame

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Old Apr 20, 2006, 7:09 AM   #4
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This photo is a struggle for the eyes. My eyes went back and forth between three things:

- the bright light of the sun
- the glove
- the foreground grass, which is the most focused part of the photo

Aside from that, that composition is well done IMHO. The right objects are in the right places. The concept and composition are good, the photo was just not shot right.

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Old Apr 20, 2006, 10:04 AM   #5
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I can not add much... i agree with the above posts. Just keep trying, as most things in life you will become an expert if you keep trying!
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