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Old Apr 20, 2006, 8:15 PM   #1
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It was an assignment but I'm just starting to learn how to bounce flash... I'm not sure what I think of this one. Not the child... the lighting... the child I'm partial to since he's my son.

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Old Apr 20, 2006, 9:27 PM   #2
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LOL, i think this is pretty nice. you may want to work on simplifying your composition.i think he looks great and expressive- nice window light....the stuff behind his head is a little distracting and unnecessary...overall a nice job though
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Old Apr 21, 2006, 11:17 PM   #3
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Better? I think I have a bad habit of cropping too tight when I take a picture.




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Old Apr 21, 2006, 11:19 PM   #4
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I like the second one better. Nice picture!

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Old Apr 22, 2006, 6:17 AM   #5
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nice work

2nd shot is definately better. I seem to like the longer ferame and the backing is not distracting in this shot. i think this is nice and you have done well uising the flash> all the mid tone detail is there and intact and this is great to see with flash photography

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