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Old May 13, 2006, 11:02 AM   #1
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Old May 13, 2006, 8:43 PM   #2
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Hmmm Im not sure I can't put my finger on it, I like but there is also something about it not grabbing me. Maybe the composition not sure. Maybe need more contrast and also the upper left part of the sky is too bright for me. Also try fixing the Horizon it's tilted.
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Old May 13, 2006, 8:46 PM   #3
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I don't think the comosition is tight enough on the boat. There is too much sky and the bright reflection on the water take the eye away from the boat as the viewer is drawn to the brighter elements in the scene.

There is potential here, but its not quite realized.
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Old May 14, 2006, 4:15 AM   #4
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Thanks for your honest opinions.
The shot is as it was in-camera (bar that it is a web copy) so it wouldn't be too difficult to crop some of the sky out, some of the beach on the left out and rotate it slightly.
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