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Old Jun 17, 2006, 2:08 PM   #1
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Severalrainy days in my town andI nothing to shoot outsideso I try something different for me untill the Sun come again.......

Hope you will share some comments on this one....

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Old Jun 17, 2006, 5:37 PM   #2
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Really Cool idea and nice shot and compisition,
My only modifications would be to crop it and clean up the edges, and remove that annoying background noise (excuse my rushed edit). Looking at it now the noise almost helps give light to the background, maybey selecting it our and bluring it to produce a more smooth effect. I'd reccomend a border but I can't decide on the color (I stuck in a white one to seperate from forum background,
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Old Jun 17, 2006, 11:30 PM   #3
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Just reframe it !


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Old Jun 17, 2006, 11:30 PM   #4
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Just reframe it !


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Old Jun 18, 2006, 11:13 AM   #5
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Less would be better here. One of each perhaps. The extra glasses take away from the pitcher.
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Old Jun 18, 2006, 11:30 AM   #6
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Thanks for comments everyone, I was thinking that shooting tha glass would not be easy.....

So we have to do better composition and ofcourse to work with at least two light source. There was only one......

OK, let's go again....

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